WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FIRE ZOOM:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

Fireworks are dangerous. The fire from the fireworks might burn somebody badly.

Fireworks make lots of noise. Animals could get frightened and run away.

Fireworks are also bad for the air and could make a hole in the ozone layer.

That is why I think that fireworks should be banned.


Tawa

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BEAUTIFUL FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because it is fun to watch fireworks because they have beautiful colours and patterns.

People get to stay up late to watch fireworks. It is nice to relax outside and watch them. Fireworks are great to watch.

That is why I think that fireworks should not be banned.



Ta’a-Marie

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FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because fireworks are really fun to watch. They are really exciting.

Families get to spend some time together when fireworks are on. People also get to have fireworks for other occasions like New Year.

Sometimes fireworks can scare animals away but fireworks are still fun if people aren’t silly with them.

I reckon everyone should be allowed fireworks.


Riley

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COOL FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because adults have fun with the fireworks when they get to watch them. Fireworks are really fun to watch with all of the colours. Fireworks are beautiful.

The public displays of fireworks are safer because they have more area. Fireworks are a way for people to spend more time together with their family to watch.

Fireworks can be used to celebrate other things like birthdays, Christmas, New Years Eve and Guy Fawkes.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.



Nikita

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DANGEROUS FIREWORKS:

I think all fireworks should be banned.

I think this because some people are scared of fireworks. The sound might scare them or even how big the fireworks are. The noise scares animals so they might run away.

The smoke from the fireworks is bad for the environment so it could poke a big hole in the ozone layer.

Some people are not sensible with the fireworks. Some animals get killed because of this. Things could get destroyed. People could get burnt and fires could start.

I still think fireworks could be fun if silly people weren’t silly with fireworks.

That is why I think fireworks should be banned.



Lydia

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are really cool because they are colourful. People can watch fireworks in public displays where the fireworks won’t burn trees.

It is nice to watch fireworks. They are cooler than going out for dinner. Fireworks glow and look cool. They glow when they explode.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.


Lukas

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EVIL FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

I think this because in the wrong hands fireworks can blow up stuff. If people set fireworks off in the forest the fireworks could burn down trees.

The smoke from the fireworks can wreck the ozone layer. The smoke is also bad for people.

The sound of the fireworks can stress animals.

That is why I think fireworks should be banned.


Louis