WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

DESTROYER FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

Fireworks can burn down trees because the heat from the fireworks could start a fire. The fireworks could break down the ozone layer by the pollution they make. The smoke could go into the earth’s atmosphere. There could be no more oxygen for people to breath.

Some silly people could blow up a car with fireworks. People would have to buy a new car.

Fireworks can scare animals. If people have pets they can go crazy with the noise fireworks make.

That is why I think that fireworks should be banned.


Abel

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Terrible T-Rex forms a fast, ferocious war.
Teeth as sharp as pins.
Has dangerous darkness in it’s heart.
Claws as shiny as gold.

By Abel

The Deer.

A deer has eyes as sharp as a crocodile’s teeth,
A deer can jump as high as the sun,
A deer can run as fast as lightening,
A deer has antlers that are as strong as bones,
A deer has legs as skinny as roots,
A deer has antlers as sharp as knives.

Have you ever seen a mountain?
Cold ice, silent bellbird, snowy white.
Amazing.
By Abel


Have you ever played soccer?
Kicking running, scoring goals, hard games.
Awesome.
By Abel

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AUTUMN SENSES POEMS: Descriptive Writing

Autumn wind sounds like a werewolf dashing through the beautiful leaves in the freezing cold air.
Autumn looks like leaves flying through the cold icy wind that howls like a ghost.
Autumn leaves feel like a rough rocky mountain.
Autumn leaves look like little snowflakes fluttering to the cold icy ground.

By Abel

FUN SWIMMING CARNIVAL

Last week on Thursday Room 14 had their swimming carnival. I went first in the starfish. When we did the piggyback race Lydia was my partner and then we shook hands underwater.

My favourite event was underwater swimming. I tried to hold my breath for longest. Other people bet me but I tried my hardest.

When I hopped out of the pool I felt freezing but then my mum and dad came to get me. I felt extraordinary.

I can not wait until next year’s swimming carnival.

Abel

MY FIRST DAY IN AUCKLAND

Last year I went to Auckland with my family to see penguins. The penguins were King and Gentu. I went on a carriage. On the carriage I saw millions of penguins. Afterwards I saw a giant squid that was dead. Then we went on a moving floor and we had to find a shark in the glass sphere. It had a hollow hole with a moving floor. At the exit I bought a toy penguin. It was excellent.

By Abel

BACK AT SCHOOL

On February the 3rd I had my first day back at school. I was going to be in Room 14. I was awfully excited to meet Lydia and my friends again. When I got to school I played with Zoob. When it was time to go I felt sad. School is cool!

By Abel

FUN SWIMMING

Today Room 14 went swimming at the school pool. First we practised breathing at the bar at the side of the pool. Second we did a handshake under the water. My partner was Lydia. Third we did a starfish on our back. I did the starfish for the longest. It was extraordinary. I can’t wait until next time.

By Abel