WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are fun and colourful. They’re amazing!

Fireworks glow when they explode at night. It looks like a red ball going up to the sky and exploding into drops.

Fireworks are something fun to do. They are more fun than going out for pizza.

Even though fireworks are for kids, adults like them too.

That is why I think that fireworks shouldn’t be banned.


Harry

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

A camel eats cactus as spiky as a hedgehog.
A camel can walk halfway through the desert fresh like an apple.
Furry and funny.
Fantastic and cool.

By Harry

Hot Furry Camel

A camel has eyes as black as the stripe on a bee,
A camel has nostrils as black as a cave,
A camel is as slurpy as a dog,
A camel is as rattly as a cat,
As furry as a bear,
A camel is as camouflaged as a stick insect.

Have you ever felt winter?
Building lego, skiing snow, icy cold.
Fun.
By Harry


Have you ever seen a movie?
Yummy pizza, crunchy nice, Toy Story.
Cool.
By Harry

Autumn tastes like nice boiling hot chocolate when
I’m feeling cold.
Autumn leaves sound like crunchy rubbish getting
run over by a truck.
Autumn looks like old crunchy leaves falling from
the sun.

By Harry

WATER CARNIVAL ICE

On Thursday we had the swimming carnival. I thought my mum was coming but she wasn’t. I felt quite sad about that but I was glad that all of the other adults cheered which was good.

When I got out I got splashed. When I got some choosing time I didn’t actually do choosing time. I just sat down and had a chat to Arlo. A girl splashed us by kicking.

I can’t wait until next time we have a swimming carnival.

Harry

MONEY DAY WEEKS

On the first day on pocket money day I was excited. The first toy I bought was a Hot Wheel. The fun part was when I opened the packet and played with the Hot Wheel. I put my car in the box where I keep all my cars then it was dinner time. I wanted to play with it next time. I like choosing Hot Wheels.

By Harry

NERVOUS DAY

It was the first day back at school. I was excited in the morning but I did get up on the wrong side of bed. I knew Abel before school. I was in Sally’s class. She told me they had rules. I played with the blocks. I was brave. Sally taught me what 1 + 1 = 2 is. She told me that they do sentences. Then I went home. I couldn’t wait until tomorrow.

By Harry

ICE SWIMMING

Today in Room 14 all the kids went swimming. We put our head to the side to breathe. It was freezing. I shook hand with Blake underwater then I went dive fetching. Then we hopped out. I want to do diving next time.

By Harry