WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

BANNED FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

Some people tie fireworks to animals. People tied fireworks to a bird and lit them.

Fireworks are loud and people can get deaf.

Some people light fireworks in houses and trees. They might catch on fire.

That is why fireworks should be banned.



Blake

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Scary shark tries to eat you.
Sharks are as grey as rock.
Sharks are as vicious as a crocodile.
Sharks are as fast as a racing car.
Sneaky and savage.

By Blake

The Shark.



A shark has teeth as sharp as a sword,
A shark is as big as a bus,
A shark is as fast as a leopard,
A shark is as grey as a rock,
A shark is as long as a beach,
A shark is as sneaky as a robber.

By Blake

Have you ever seen snow?
Crunchy hard, cold wet, soft white.
Fun.
By Blake


Have you ever seen snowflakes?
Light white, cold wet, soft fluffy.
Cool.
By Blake

Autumn sounds like colourful leaves rustling in the wind.
Autumn frost is white in the dark morning.
Autumn feels like cold wind blowing on my arms.

By Blake

SWIMMING TIME

Last week on Thursday the Pohutukawa Syndicate had a swimming carnival. We had the swimming carnival. I felt happy.

First we did the starfish. It was cool. We did the over arm width. We did the piggyback race. I saw my mum. We did the shaking hands under water. It was cold.

I did not do much of the races. The race that was my favourite was the piggyback race with Jasper. I held onto Jasper’s back in the piggyback race. In the over arm width I came second to last.

I cannot wait until next time.

Blake

DINGHY

When I went on my family’s dinghy we went fishing. I was the only one to catch a fish. I caught some snapper. I caught three snapper. They were yummy. I felt happy because I was the only one to catch snapper. I was glad.

By Blake

MY FIRST DAY BACK AT SCHOOL

On my first day back at school I was happy. I am in room 14. In Room 14 we do fun things. We play lots of games and read lots of books. School is really cool.

By Blake

UNDERWATER FUN

Today Room 14 went swimming in the pool. We did kicking holding onto the bar. It was cold. We got free time. I got a little diving stick I played with. Then Room 14 walked back to class. I dried off with a towel. I can’t wait to go again.

By Blake