WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should not be banned.

You can see fireworks at night. They are cool to look at because they are colourful.

Fireworks are something cool to do. They are more fun than watching television. Fireworks are also better than having dinner.

A family can go to the park together and see fireworks.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.


Liam

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Dangerous dinosaur.
Big and bouncy.
As fast as a jet plane.
As bright as a person.
As scary as a snake.

By Liam

The Big Fish

The big fish has eyes as scary as a monster,
The big fish has fins as sharp as a knife,
The big fish has scales as sharp as a dinosaur tooth,
The big fish is as slimy as mud.

Have you ever tasted hot chocolate?
Melting marshmallows, warm smooth, tasty nice.
Delicious.
By Liam

Liam:

Personalize funny videos and birthday eCards at JibJab!

Autumn feels like hot crunchy apple crumble on a cold night.
Autumn looks like big trees and leaves smashing down in the wild wind.
Autumn sounds like red crunching leaves under my feet.

By Liam