WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should be banned.

The smoke from the fireworks is bad for the earth.

Some people are not sensible with fireworks. They might tie fireworks to cats’ tails.

Fireworks can be very dangerous.

That is why fireworks should be banned.



Jasper

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Furious fire breathing dragon,
A fantastic creature.
So mighty, so bossy.
Bothering everyone.
Bulldozering his way through the world.
A very super dragon.
As scary as an earthquake.
As fierce as a scorpion.

By Jasper

Snake

A snake is as slimy as a snail,
A snake is as fast as a lion,
A snake is as poisonous as a scorpion,
A snake is as clever as a fox,
A snake has eyesight as sharp as a needle.

Have you ever been skiing?
Icy cold, flickering fire, freezing mountain.
Awesome.
By Jasper

Autumn sounds like freezing cold wind blowing the
rustling crunchy leaves onto the hard ground.
Autumn looks like colourful red, yellow, orange,
green and brown leaves dancing in the cold windy wind.

By Jasper

SPLASH TIME

Last week on Thursday Room 14 had our swimming carnival. I was behind Lennard in the over arm race. I was behind Torfun in the flutterboard race. I was second in all of the races.

It was very cold in the school pool. It was very, very spectacular.

Jasper

WHEN MY COUSINS CAME

I felt happy when my cousins came from Tasmania. My cousin Abby is six and Zara is nine. Uncle Jerry told us off because we were gong in our sleeping bags and going down the stairs in them. We went to the hydroslide. I went right behind Zara and I was holding onto her mat. We had a little play on the swing. It was fun. Then we got in the car and went home. I had a great day.

By Jasper

FIRST DAY

On February the 3rd I had my first day back at school. I was going to be in Room 14. I was very happy to be in the next year. I like my teacher.
We do fun work in Room 14.

By Jasper

SWIMMING FUN

Today Room 14 got their togs to go swimming.
We walked to the pool. We all listened to Helen. We hopped in the pool. We did handshakes underwater. I love going swimming.

By Jasper