WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

EVIL FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

I think this because in the wrong hands fireworks can blow up stuff. If people set fireworks off in the forest the fireworks could burn down trees.

The smoke from the fireworks can wreck the ozone layer. The smoke is also bad for people.

The sound of the fireworks can stress animals.

That is why I think fireworks should be banned.


Louis

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should not be banned.

You can see fireworks at night. They are cool to look at because they are colourful.

Fireworks are something cool to do. They are more fun than watching television. Fireworks are also better than having dinner.

A family can go to the park together and see fireworks.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.


Liam

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because children have lots of fun with the fireworks. Watching them is really fun. Adults have so much fun as well. It is more fun that watching a movie at the theatre and eating pizza.

Fireworks are good to celebrate birthdays, New Year and even Christmas.

They are really fun. I cannot wait until next year. So do not ban fireworks.



Kayla

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are pretty. They explode in the sky like exploding bombs in all different colours.

If fireworks were banned we wouldn’t get to celebrate Guy Fawkes because otherwise people would throw the fireworks away.

Public displays of fireworks are safer. People don’t get hurt.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.



Karel

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should be banned.

The smoke from the fireworks is bad for the earth.

Some people are not sensible with fireworks. They might tie fireworks to cats’ tails.

Fireworks can be very dangerous.

That is why fireworks should be banned.



Jasper

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are fun and colourful. They’re amazing!

Fireworks glow when they explode at night. It looks like a red ball going up to the sky and exploding into drops.

Fireworks are something fun to do. They are more fun than going out for pizza.

Even though fireworks are for kids, adults like them too.

That is why I think that fireworks shouldn’t be banned.


Harry

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are beautiful. Fireworks are good to look at. They are colourful.

People use fireworks to celebrate special days like Guy Fawkes.

Don’t ban fireworks.