Wednesday, November 17, 2010

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are fun and colourful. They’re amazing!

Fireworks glow when they explode at night. It looks like a red ball going up to the sky and exploding into drops.

Fireworks are something fun to do. They are more fun than going out for pizza.

Even though fireworks are for kids, adults like them too.

That is why I think that fireworks shouldn’t be banned.


Harry
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are beautiful. Fireworks are good to look at. They are colourful.

People use fireworks to celebrate special days like Guy Fawkes.

Don’t ban fireworks.
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

BAD FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should be banned.

I think this because animals and some people can get hurt if they are too close to the fireworks. Fires can happen if the fireworks hit plants.

Some people can be scared of fireworks when they explode. Noises can scare animals when the fireworks hit the sky.

That is why I think fireworks should be banned.


Ella
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

COLOURFUL FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because families can have picnics together and celebrate Guy Fawkes. People could have lots of fun watching the fireworks.

I think people should still have fireworks because everyone can watch them. People can go to public displays and they can watch fireworks there.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.


Ebony
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

BANNED FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

Some people tie fireworks to animals. People tied fireworks to a bird and lit them.

Fireworks are loud and people can get deaf.

Some people light fireworks in houses and trees. They might catch on fire.

That is why fireworks should be banned.



Blake
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THE BIG BANG:

I think that all fireworks should be banned.

I think this because fireworks can burn down a tree which is bad for the environment.

The noise from the fireworks scares animals and they run away.

The smoke that comes from the fireworks is bad for the ozone layer.

That is why I think that fireworks should be banned.


Arlo
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE AN ARGUMENT:

DESTROYER FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

Fireworks can burn down trees because the heat from the fireworks could start a fire. The fireworks could break down the ozone layer by the pollution they make. The smoke could go into the earth’s atmosphere. There could be no more oxygen for people to breath.

Some silly people could blow up a car with fireworks. People would have to buy a new car.

Fireworks can scare animals. If people have pets they can go crazy with the noise fireworks make.

That is why I think that fireworks should be banned.


Abel