WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Shiny spider slides down a scary slope,
very slowly,
As slow as a snake in the sunlight.

By Lukas

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

A camel eats cactus as spiky as a hedgehog.
A camel can walk halfway through the desert fresh like an apple.
Furry and funny.
Fantastic and cool.

By Harry

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Playful puppy.
Pretty pouncing puppy.
Soft cuddly puppy prancing along the ground.
Small and sneaky.
As soft as a cloud.
As beautiful as the sky.

By Ebony

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Brilliant bird.
Beautiful black bird sat in a tree.
It’s feathers as fluffy as a cloud.
Beak as sharp as a needle.
As cute as a puppy.
Lovely.

By Tawa

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Fantastic flying butterfly.
Blue and brown butterfly.
Floats like a cloud up in the sky.

By Nikita

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Dangerous dinosaur.
Big and bouncy.
As fast as a jet plane.
As bright as a person.
As scary as a snake.

By Liam

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Horse. As playful as a puppy.
Magnificent mane is as soft as sheep’s wool.
Playfully prancing in a paddock.

By Kayla