Sunday, September 19, 2010

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Cute cuddly horse.
Playful, pouncing, pretty horse.
As black as a spider.
As jumpy as a deer.

By Ella
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

A kitten is as friendly as a teddy bear.
As funny as a dog.
As warm as the sun.

By Tim
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Scary shark tries to eat you.
Sharks are as grey as rock.
Sharks are as vicious as a crocodile.
Sharks are as fast as a racing car.
Sneaky and savage.

By Blake
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Terrible Tyrannosaurus.
Huge teeth.
As scary as a tiger.
As dangerous as a crocodile.
Green as grass.

By Arlo
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Deadly dragon.
Big, black, brave dragon.
Has claws as sharp as antlers.
Breath as hot as a flame.
Skin as black as the dark lord.

By Tom
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Terrible T-Rex.
Tearing meat.
Teeth as sharp as needles.
Ancient and extinct.

By Karel
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Deadly dragon.
Fiery flames.
As big as a boulder.
As ferocious as a lion.
As strong as an ox and as fast as a fox.

By Lydia