Sunday, September 19, 2010

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Deadly dragon.
Fiery flames.
As big as a boulder.
As ferocious as a lion.
As strong as an ox and as fast as a fox.

By Lydia
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Deadly dragon.
Fiery flames as big as a building.
As strong as gold.
Sharp scary spikes give the biggest shock of your life.

By Josh
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Furious fire breathing dragon,
A fantastic creature.
So mighty, so bossy.
Bothering everyone.
Bulldozering his way through the world.
A very super dragon.
As scary as an earthquake.
As fierce as a scorpion.

By Jasper
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Terrible T-Rex forms a fast, ferocious war.
Teeth as sharp as pins.
Has dangerous darkness in it’s heart.
Claws as shiny as gold.

By Abel
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Strong gorilla.
As black as night.
Muscles as big as windows.
Hairy and healthy.

By Riley
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Playful pretty puppy.
Beautiful brown puppy.
A puppy jumps like a frog.
A puppy is as cute as a rabbit.
Sniffing squeaky puppy.
Sneaky black puppy.

By Ta’a-Marie
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Horrible hairy spider.
As poisonous as a snake.
As black as a bear.
Weaving a web.

By Halie-Rose