Sunday, September 19, 2010

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

A camel eats cactus as spiky as a hedgehog.
A camel can walk halfway through the desert fresh like an apple.
Furry and funny.
Fantastic and cool.

By Harry
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  1. Miss SmithNovember 10, 2010 at 7:10 PM

    I wish I could walk halfway through the desert and be as fresh as an apple.

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