WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Cute cuddly cat.
As cute as a dog.
As bouncy as a rabbit.
Playful and pretty.
As cheeky as a mouse.

By Torfun

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Shiny spider slides down a scary slope,
very slowly,
As slow as a snake in the sunlight.

By Lukas

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

A camel eats cactus as spiky as a hedgehog.
A camel can walk halfway through the desert fresh like an apple.
Furry and funny.
Fantastic and cool.

By Harry

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Playful puppy.
Pretty pouncing puppy.
Soft cuddly puppy prancing along the ground.
Small and sneaky.
As soft as a cloud.
As beautiful as the sky.

By Ebony

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Brilliant bird.
Beautiful black bird sat in a tree.
It’s feathers as fluffy as a cloud.
Beak as sharp as a needle.
As cute as a puppy.
Lovely.

By Tawa

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Fantastic flying butterfly.
Blue and brown butterfly.
Floats like a cloud up in the sky.

By Nikita

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Dangerous dinosaur.
Big and bouncy.
As fast as a jet plane.
As bright as a person.
As scary as a snake.

By Liam

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Horse. As playful as a puppy.
Magnificent mane is as soft as sheep’s wool.
Playfully prancing in a paddock.

By Kayla

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Cute cuddly horse.
Playful, pouncing, pretty horse.
As black as a spider.
As jumpy as a deer.

By Ella

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

A kitten is as friendly as a teddy bear.
As funny as a dog.
As warm as the sun.

By Tim

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Scary shark tries to eat you.
Sharks are as grey as rock.
Sharks are as vicious as a crocodile.
Sharks are as fast as a racing car.
Sneaky and savage.

By Blake

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Terrible Tyrannosaurus.
Huge teeth.
As scary as a tiger.
As dangerous as a crocodile.
Green as grass.

By Arlo

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Deadly dragon.
Big, black, brave dragon.
Has claws as sharp as antlers.
Breath as hot as a flame.
Skin as black as the dark lord.

By Tom

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Terrible T-Rex.
Tearing meat.
Teeth as sharp as needles.
Ancient and extinct.

By Karel

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Deadly dragon.
Fiery flames.
As big as a boulder.
As ferocious as a lion.
As strong as an ox and as fast as a fox.

By Lydia

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Deadly dragon.
Fiery flames as big as a building.
As strong as gold.
Sharp scary spikes give the biggest shock of your life.

By Josh

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Furious fire breathing dragon,
A fantastic creature.
So mighty, so bossy.
Bothering everyone.
Bulldozering his way through the world.
A very super dragon.
As scary as an earthquake.
As fierce as a scorpion.

By Jasper

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Terrible T-Rex forms a fast, ferocious war.
Teeth as sharp as pins.
Has dangerous darkness in it’s heart.
Claws as shiny as gold.

By Abel

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Strong gorilla.
As black as night.
Muscles as big as windows.
Hairy and healthy.

By Riley

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Playful pretty puppy.
Beautiful brown puppy.
A puppy jumps like a frog.
A puppy is as cute as a rabbit.
Sniffing squeaky puppy.
Sneaky black puppy.

By Ta’a-Marie

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE POEM
USING ALLITERATION AND SIMILES:

Horrible hairy spider.
As poisonous as a snake.
As black as a bear.
Weaving a web.

By Halie-Rose