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FIRE ZOOM:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

Fireworks are dangerous. The fire from the fireworks might burn somebody badly.

Fireworks make lots of noise. Animals could get frightened and run away.

Fireworks are also bad for the air and could make a hole in the ozone layer.

That is why I think that fireworks should be banned.


Tawa

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BEAUTIFUL FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because it is fun to watch fireworks because they have beautiful colours and patterns.

People get to stay up late to watch fireworks. It is nice to relax outside and watch them. Fireworks are great to watch.

That is why I think that fireworks should not be banned.



Ta’a-Marie

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FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because fireworks are really fun to watch. They are really exciting.

Families get to spend some time together when fireworks are on. People also get to have fireworks for other occasions like New Year.

Sometimes fireworks can scare animals away but fireworks are still fun if people aren’t silly with them.

I reckon everyone should be allowed fireworks.


Riley

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COOL FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because adults have fun with the fireworks when they get to watch them. Fireworks are really fun to watch with all of the colours. Fireworks are beautiful.

The public displays of fireworks are safer because they have more area. Fireworks are a way for people to spend more time together with their family to watch.

Fireworks can be used to celebrate other things like birthdays, Christmas, New Years Eve and Guy Fawkes.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.



Nikita

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DANGEROUS FIREWORKS:

I think all fireworks should be banned.

I think this because some people are scared of fireworks. The sound might scare them or even how big the fireworks are. The noise scares animals so they might run away.

The smoke from the fireworks is bad for the environment so it could poke a big hole in the ozone layer.

Some people are not sensible with the fireworks. Some animals get killed because of this. Things could get destroyed. People could get burnt and fires could start.

I still think fireworks could be fun if silly people weren’t silly with fireworks.

That is why I think fireworks should be banned.



Lydia

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FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are really cool because they are colourful. People can watch fireworks in public displays where the fireworks won’t burn trees.

It is nice to watch fireworks. They are cooler than going out for dinner. Fireworks glow and look cool. They glow when they explode.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.


Lukas

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EVIL FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

I think this because in the wrong hands fireworks can blow up stuff. If people set fireworks off in the forest the fireworks could burn down trees.

The smoke from the fireworks can wreck the ozone layer. The smoke is also bad for people.

The sound of the fireworks can stress animals.

That is why I think fireworks should be banned.


Louis

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FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should not be banned.

You can see fireworks at night. They are cool to look at because they are colourful.

Fireworks are something cool to do. They are more fun than watching television. Fireworks are also better than having dinner.

A family can go to the park together and see fireworks.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.


Liam

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FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because children have lots of fun with the fireworks. Watching them is really fun. Adults have so much fun as well. It is more fun that watching a movie at the theatre and eating pizza.

Fireworks are good to celebrate birthdays, New Year and even Christmas.

They are really fun. I cannot wait until next year. So do not ban fireworks.



Kayla

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FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are pretty. They explode in the sky like exploding bombs in all different colours.

If fireworks were banned we wouldn’t get to celebrate Guy Fawkes because otherwise people would throw the fireworks away.

Public displays of fireworks are safer. People don’t get hurt.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.



Karel

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FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should be banned.

The smoke from the fireworks is bad for the earth.

Some people are not sensible with fireworks. They might tie fireworks to cats’ tails.

Fireworks can be very dangerous.

That is why fireworks should be banned.



Jasper

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FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are fun and colourful. They’re amazing!

Fireworks glow when they explode at night. It looks like a red ball going up to the sky and exploding into drops.

Fireworks are something fun to do. They are more fun than going out for pizza.

Even though fireworks are for kids, adults like them too.

That is why I think that fireworks shouldn’t be banned.


Harry

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FUN FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should not be banned.

Fireworks are beautiful. Fireworks are good to look at. They are colourful.

People use fireworks to celebrate special days like Guy Fawkes.

Don’t ban fireworks.

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BAD FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should be banned.

I think this because animals and some people can get hurt if they are too close to the fireworks. Fires can happen if the fireworks hit plants.

Some people can be scared of fireworks when they explode. Noises can scare animals when the fireworks hit the sky.

That is why I think fireworks should be banned.


Ella

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COLOURFUL FIREWORKS:

I think fireworks should not be banned.

I think this because families can have picnics together and celebrate Guy Fawkes. People could have lots of fun watching the fireworks.

I think people should still have fireworks because everyone can watch them. People can go to public displays and they can watch fireworks there.

That is why I think fireworks should not be banned.


Ebony

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BANNED FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

Some people tie fireworks to animals. People tied fireworks to a bird and lit them.

Fireworks are loud and people can get deaf.

Some people light fireworks in houses and trees. They might catch on fire.

That is why fireworks should be banned.



Blake

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THE BIG BANG:

I think that all fireworks should be banned.

I think this because fireworks can burn down a tree which is bad for the environment.

The noise from the fireworks scares animals and they run away.

The smoke that comes from the fireworks is bad for the ozone layer.

That is why I think that fireworks should be banned.


Arlo

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DESTROYER FIREWORKS:

I think that fireworks should be banned.

Fireworks can burn down trees because the heat from the fireworks could start a fire. The fireworks could break down the ozone layer by the pollution they make. The smoke could go into the earth’s atmosphere. There could be no more oxygen for people to breath.

Some silly people could blow up a car with fireworks. People would have to buy a new car.

Fireworks can scare animals. If people have pets they can go crazy with the noise fireworks make.

That is why I think that fireworks should be banned.


Abel