Thursday, April 29, 2010

AUTUMN SENSES POEMS: Descriptive Writing

Autumn wind sounds like a werewolf dashing through the beautiful leaves in the freezing cold air.
Autumn looks like leaves flying through the cold icy wind that howls like a ghost.
Autumn leaves feel like a rough rocky mountain.
Autumn leaves look like little snowflakes fluttering to the cold icy ground.

By Abel
Autumn looks like leaves, all different colours whooshing through the chilly autumn wind.
Autumn feels like spiky black balls stabbing the ground.
I hear the colourful leaves crackling on the trees.

By Arlo
Autumn sounds like colourful leaves rustling in the wind.
Autumn frost is white in the dark morning.
Autumn feels like cold wind blowing on my arms.

By Blake
Autumn sounds like rustling leaves in the wild wind.
Autumn feels like warm and boiling hot chocolate sliding straight down my throat.
Autumn looks like rustling leaves going straight down to the ground.
Autumn sounds like crunching leaves under your feet when you step on the crunchy, noisy leaves.
Autumn feels like cold, frosty, freezing, wild wind breezing in the air.

By Ebony
Autumn looks like the cold, wild wind going through
the red and yellow leaves.
Autumn looks like the black dark sky.
Autumn feels like warm, soft slippers in the cold morning.

By Ella
Autumn sounds like crashing leaves.
Autumn feels like hot chocolate on icy cold days.
Autumn looks like branches with no leaves.

By Halie-Rose
Autumn tastes like nice boiling hot chocolate when
I’m feeling cold.
Autumn leaves sound like crunchy rubbish getting
run over by a truck.
Autumn looks like old crunchy leaves falling from
the sun.

By Harry
Autumn sounds like freezing cold wind blowing the
rustling crunchy leaves onto the hard ground.
Autumn looks like colourful red, yellow, orange,
green and brown leaves dancing in the cold windy wind.

By Jasper
Autumn sounds like fast, loud wind whacking a pinata with a hard solid bat.
Autumn sounds like rough leaves scraping on the solid pathway.
Autumn leaves feel like crispy chips rubbing on my hand.
Autumn leaves look like colourful fruit on the trees.

By Josh
Autumn feels like ice under my feet.
Autumn tastes like hot chocolate in the early morning.
The dark, glowing night gives me a chill.
Autumn smells like daisies in the autumn air.
Autumn sounds like wild wind whistling through the trees.

By Kayla
Autumn looks like green, red and yellow leaves moving in the frosty wind.
Autumn feels like you are going to freeze in the icy cold wind.
Autumn sounds like wind whooshing through the rustling trees.

By Lennard
Autumn feels like hot crunchy apple crumble on a cold night.
Autumn looks like big trees and leaves smashing down in the wild wind.
Autumn sounds like red crunching leaves under my feet.

By Liam
Autumn sounds like freezing wind howling like wolves.
Autumn looks like colourful leaves that look like oranges.
Autumn tastes like salty chips and hot chocolate when it is pitch black.
Autumn leaves smell like a banana smoothie.
Autumn sounds like fluttering leaves in the howling wind.
By Louis
Autumn sounds like rustling whooshing wind flying frostily through the trees.
Autumn feels like crunching leaves on the frosty ground.
Autumn leaves feel like a rough rocky mountain.
Autumn looks like green, red and yellow leaves falling from the trees.

By Lukas
Autumn sounds like the wind howling like a wolf.
Autumn looks like colourful red, yellow, brown, green beautiful leaves.
Autumn feels like freezing cold wind flowing through you.
Autumn sounds like crackling leaves when you step on them.
Autumn looks like very dark sky.
Autumn feels like warm slippers.
Autumn sounds like rustling wind against the trees.
Autumn sounds like wind whooshing through the trees.

By Lydia
Autumn sounds like rustling crunchy leaves.
Autumn feels like cold windy air blowing on me.
Autumn looks like frosty, blurry windows in the cold morning.

By Riley
Autumn sounds like the wind rushing through the colourful leaves.
Autumn feels like crunching leaves when you walk on them.
Autumn looks like rustling leaves rushing straight down to the ground.
Autumn sounds like the whooshing wind blowing the beautiful leaves.
Autumn feels like leaves sticking to your icy skin.

By Ta’a-Marie
Autumn looks like the world is made out of yellow and red leaves.
Autumn feels like ice cubes on my head on a misty morning.
Autumn leaves sound like yummy yummy cookies when you step on them.
Autumn colours look like a dream world with raspberry and vanilla ice cream.

By Tawa
Autumn tastes like hot salty chips.
Autumn looks like colourful leaves, crunchy like red and green toast.
Autumn feels like toasty hot water bottles on cold nights.

By Tim
Autumn sounds like gnarly guns going off when I step on the crunchy leaves.
Autumn looks like naked branches flowing in the gloomy air at night.
Autumn feels like a nice smooth foot massage when I step on the crunchy leaves.

By Tom
Autumn sounds like the wind rushing through my
body in the gloomy, dark night.
Autumn feels like colourful leaves sticking to my freezing body.
Autumn looks like pretty colourful leaves falling down
on the ground and bare branches with nothing to wear.

By Torfun