Monday, August 16, 2010

WE ARE LEARNING TO USE SIMILES IN OUR WRITING

Doggy the Dog

A dog is as white as a cloud,
A dog is as fast as the speed of light,
A dog is as funny as a clown,
A dog is as jumpy as a rabbit,
A dog can paddle like a duck.
Fantastic Mr Eel

An Eel is as slimy as goo,
An eel is as fast as a snake,
An eel has eyes as sharp as an axe,
An eel’s teeth are as sharp as knives,
An eel is as sneaky as the wind,
An eel is as black as a pitch black room.
Mr Trot
A deer is as brown as a bear,
A deer is as fast as a car,
A deer has spots like marbles,
A deer is a smart as a meercat,
A deer trots like a horse.
Cool Bunny

A bunny is as grey as a wolf,
A bunny is as speedy as a cheetah,
A bunny is as fluffy as a pom pom,
A bunny is as smart as a scientist.
Turtle

A turtle is as slow as a snake,
A turtle is as green as grass,
A turtle has a shell as pretty as a sea shell,
A turtle has a pattern like a snake,
A turtle sounds like bubbles.
A turtle’s shell is as hard as a rock.
FANTASTIC MR SHARK!


A shark has teeth as white as crystals,
A shark has a nose as sharp as a sword,
A shark is as fast as a motor bike,
A shark is as big as a bus,
A shark has fins as scary as knives.
The Dog

A dog has a tongue as wet as water,
A dog has ears as floppy as a fish,
A dog has a tail that swings like a snake,
A dog has eyes as black as a cave,
A dog has teeth as sharp as a shark,
A dog has fur as soft as a toy.
Fast Deer

A deer is as brown as hot chocolate,
A deer has legs as long as a carrot,
A deer has eyes as black as the night,
A deer has antlers as sharp as a knife,
A deer is as smart as a fox,
A deer is as fast as a race horse.
Pterodactyl

A Pterodactyl flies like the wind,
A Pterodactyl is as smart as a scientist,
A Pterodactyl is as quick as cheetah,
A Pterodactyl is as big as a van,
A pterodactyl is as ferocious as a crocodile,
A pterodactyl is violent like a vulture.
The Big Fish

The big fish has eyes as scary as a monster,
The big fish has fins as sharp as a knife,
The big fish has scales as sharp as a dinosaur tooth,
The big fish is as slimy as mud.
Super Dog

A dog has ears as floppy as hair,
A dog’s tail is as waggy as branches in the wind,
A dog is as soft as sheep skin,
A dog runs as fast as a horse,
A dog is as playful as a kitten,
A dog has a tongue as sloppy as water.
Snake

A snake is as slimy as goo,
A snake is as venomous as gas,
A snake is as fast as an eel,
A snake is as poison as acid,
A snake is as scary as a bat,
A snake has teeth as sharp as a shark.
Snake

A snake is as slimy as a snail,
A snake is as fast as a lion,
A snake is as poisonous as a scorpion,
A snake is as clever as a fox,
A snake has eyesight as sharp as a needle.
Hot Furry Camel

A camel has eyes as black as the stripe on a bee,
A camel has nostrils as black as a cave,
A camel is as slurpy as a dog,
A camel is as rattly as a cat,
As furry as a bear,
A camel is as camouflaged as a stick insect.
Dancing Deer

A deer is as brown as chocolate,
A deer is as fast as a race car,
A deer has spots like a spotty horse,
A deer has antlers like a tree,
A deer is jumpy like springs,
A deer trots like a horse.
Clever Deer.

A deer is as brown as wood,
A deer is as speedy as a cat,
A deer is as smart as an insect,
A deer trots like a horse,
A deer is as cute as a cat.
The Shark.



A shark has teeth as sharp as a sword,
A shark is as big as a bus,
A shark is as fast as a leopard,
A shark is as grey as a rock,
A shark is as long as a beach,
A shark is as sneaky as a robber.

By Blake
Danger Rex!!

A Rex is as dangerous as lava,
A Rex is as scary as a skeleton,
A Rex is as scary as a croc,
A Rex is as green an emerald,
A Rex is as amazing as a star.
The Deer.

A deer has eyes as sharp as a crocodile’s teeth,
A deer can jump as high as the sun,
A deer can run as fast as lightening,
A deer has antlers that are as strong as bones,
A deer has legs as skinny as roots,
A deer has antlers as sharp as knives.